I know what that’s like, having an opportunity with weather that won’t cooperate! The thing that strikes my eye as looking unnatural is the cloud line on the right, just above the horizon. There was probably a highlight blown beyond recovery? The sky does look a bit processed. I like how you darkened it, but personally I might have left it the slightest bit grayer I like all the rest of the colours as you edited them. The colour of the bridge is quite striking, as it ought to. The grass, dirt and hills look all exactly as one would expect. I’d say you did a fantastic job at recovering rather bleak lighting. I’ve been often out in such weather and have almost nothing anything at all as nice to show for it.
