Just played around with a quick edit on this! Personally, I’m not feeling the need for a crop…I might edit out the yellow flare in the bottom right, though. Not entirely sure this edit is what I’d stick with, but I was just feeling like it needed to have a lighter, airy feel due to the sun flare going on. All the other edits felt heavy to me, personally.
I’ve attached my edited version, a before/after screenshot, and a screenshot of the edits I applied.