What a gorgeous scene! I like how you saturated the oranges (without overdoing it, of course). I think it would be really neat if the group in the reflection of the sun (two people and a dog?) were perfectly centered in the reflection! That might help that little group stand out from the rest. Like, they are highlighted, bringing attention to them, thus putting all the other “groups” at a lesser level of attraction, organizing the “chaos” a bit better, making it a bit more intentional feeling. Depending on the freedom you had to walk around at this place, I might try to find a more distinct subject to put in the reflection of the sun. Like, those boys at the picnic table on the left; or wait until the little group with the dog looks a little bit more like a “group with a dog”. Right now, the guy is like standing on one foot… walking maybe? I don’t know, just trying to eliminate clutter, simplifying the scene a bit, are my thoughts!
