Good morning Grace! Your pictures of the puppies are very cute. My sister recently had a litter of huskies too… if that’s what breed the puppies are! When i saw the first picture of the puppies i thought of what i learned here on lenspiration recently about “breath of sight”… if the subject is looking a certain direction we learned to leave more space on that side. James said “this helps prevent the visual flow from feeling like it is being abruptly halted”…just what i thought of when i saw that first picture!:) You also asked about the vignette… i think the purpose of a vignette is to draw attention to the subject and not to itself. I personally feel the vignette is a little heavy, I look at the puppy and then my eye wants to travel off the subject to look at the vignette. Maybe a weaker vignette would be less distracting. The other puppy pictures look good though! I also liked the pictures you took at home school camp. I like the composition and starburst affect you did on your first picture! The second picture looks professional with the boat on the third…although the horizon looks a little crooked. Your last picture with the moon has very nice framing. I thought of the photo assignment ‘moon scenery’ when is saw that picture! It seems you get the nicest pictures for an assignment after the assignment is done!:) Anyway… great job on those pics you took! I think its neat we have the same camera (a canon rebel sl3)!:) And hopefully I didn’t lead you astray with my critique!
