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@grace-galdamez, sorry I didn’t get around to responding to your photos until now! Was pretty busy there for a few weeks. But let me take a look at your photos!
– Those little newborn puppies are so cute!
– Each photo I can tell you made it a point to focus on the eyes (even though eye balls are not visible). It still makes the photo feel in focus, even when noses are not perfectly in focus.
– You’re right on eye level with them all! That’s great.
– There’s no wrinkles in the white fabric they are laying on!
– Whatever they are laying on is really nice. It feels so comfortable! It’s not like a white sheet over a board…that would look uncomfortable. Yet, it’s not like they are sinking down into a pillow. It’s very well done.
– The backgrounds are all so nice and blurred soft! Beautiful.
– “IMG_4501-puppy.jpg” is my favorite pose. You can clearly see many features of the puppy, from the nose and eye to the ear and paws.
– Edited so well. White’s appear to be white.
Not much I’d say in critique. A few things maybe:
– The last photo is back focused, the focus plane being behind the eye area.
– The vignette is very heavy, like @jenna was saying. For high-key photos, I almost never use a vignette.
– In just about each photo, I feel like there’s too little breathing room below the puppy, especially the first and last. The amount of space on the top and either side of the puppy in each photo is pretty good overall. Just underneath it feels too close, to me.
Keep up the good work!