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April 26, 2021 at 12:38 pm #62265Blessings CapturedParticipantApril 26, 2021 at 7:04 pm #62280Frazer FamilyParticipant
Wow, these photos show a lot of creativity in composition.
One note on the first one, 20210419-HMJ_5929-edit1-100-sec-at-f-5.6ISO-80055-mmNIKON-D3400.jpg, you might either (I’m assuming this is a composite) push the first line of text a smidgen higher so it doesn’t run through the button on the hat. Also maybe use an even thinner font for the second line (something like Roboto Thin). Just a suggestion; I’m sure you’ve already played around with that a lot.April 26, 2021 at 9:24 pm #62281Blessings CapturedParticipantThank you @Frazer-Family! Those two things make a big difference!
May 3, 2021 at 5:32 pm #62377Lydia BennettKeymasterThese are very good, @blessingscaptured! So much good visual flow in each of these photos! And I love the depth!
Personally, I might crop off the little bit of white along the right side of 59331, and I probably wouldn’t have made the dark areas quite so dark in 61641. For the last photo, 61851, the “2021” is a little high in the photo and I might have looked for a different surface…I’m not sure what you were using but the texture almost looks like it has dirt speckles on it. 🙂
But really, I’m impressed! You have such creative variety and pleasant compositions! Good job, and congrats to your sister on her graduation! 🙂
May 11, 2021 at 8:54 pm #62500Blessings CapturedParticipantThank you @lenspirationlydia for the helpful critiques.
congrats to your sister
Yes! She has one lesson left in calculus then she’ll be Done!
May 12, 2021 at 4:25 pm #62513Lydia BennettKeymasterThat’s great! Good for her! High School Graduation is such a special time and a big stepping-stone in the classroom of life!
June 9, 2021 at 10:35 am #63124James StaddonKeymasterWell done, @blessingscaptured! The “Congratulations Graduates!” text design is very creative, with the white border going behind. Everything is very sharp, good depth of field, creative and full arrangements. The two I like least are #4 (with no “2021”, and the gold “Holy Bible” text not standing out like it does in #3, there doesn’t feel to be a real subject) and #5 (the “2021” being small, angle not super dynamic, and rolled up diploma feeling cut off since it’s practically half cut off). Overall very nice job!
June 9, 2021 at 12:17 pm #63131Blessings CapturedParticipantThank you @jamesstaddon. I see what you mean about #4, and #5.
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