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  • #31521

    Peanut
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    Took these in full sun. What do you think?

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    #31529

    Sarah Lewis
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    If I was to redo the first one I would focus on the very middle of the flower. it’s out of focus when it should be in focus. 😀
    The second one should probably be focusing on the flowers not the leaves. But very nice colors. Good job!

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    Peanut
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    Ok thanks, I see your point! Oops!

    BTW I love your sheltie. We have one too!

    • This reply was modified 4 months, 3 weeks ago by  Peanut.
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    James Staddon
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    Yeah, the main thing there with that first shot is I’d be focused on the tip the stigma there in the eye of the daffodil. Secondly, I’d probably have framed the flower more on the left side instead of dead center. Lastly, I would increase the saturation a bit and remove the couple little specs on the leaves. I think the second shot could be framed better somehow, to emphasize the idea of “two”, but I really like the blurry background!

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