May 28, 2021 at 12:12 pm #62927James StaddonKeymaster
And for those of you that missed Tuesday’s Photo Coaching Webinar, or just want to go back and watch the critique of your submissions, here’s the replay link: https://www.lenspiration.com/video/webinar65/. You’ll also find definitions of the design concepts discussed during the webinar at that link.
For anyone interested in seeing how your Verse Pic did on the scoreboard, I’ve attached that below!
In addition, the publisher specifically requested that the following submissions be re-submitted, with some design tweaks made to them. If your Verse Pic is not included in the selection, you can still feel free to redesign it as well.
Frequent comments from the review team at Olivet Baptist Church was that text on the designs was just too small to read on a phone, so please bear that in mind if you choose to redesign any of your Verse Pics. Think of ways to include design concepts we talked about in the webinar as well! You can feel free to follow up with questions you may have right here on the forum.
Any Verse Pics that you redesign and resubmit will not be counted as paid winners for this assignment, but will be a blessing to the publisher nonetheless!May 28, 2021 at 12:23 pm #62930Blessings CapturedParticipantMay 31, 2021 at 3:46 am #62994
I so enjoyed hearing the comments from the publisher and @jamesstaddon during the webinar! It was helpful learning the different design techniques and what things to be aware of when designing VersePics for phones etc.
Here are the VersePics that the publisher requested for resubmission. I hope that they’re easier to read now. 🙂May 31, 2021 at 3:51 am #63005June 1, 2021 at 3:17 pm #63020June 1, 2021 at 10:03 pm #63023Lydia BennettKeymaster
Yes, thank you so much! Here’s what the publisher has to say about the resubmissions up to this point:
These are wonderful! Excellent work preserving the graphic design elements while enlarging the text as that can be a challenge. Thank you, thank you!!
So, great job! Your Verse Pics are really well done. Love them.
@creative-click-photography, just a quick thought on some of yours. The margin of text seems very small on the designs where the text is close to the edge. Personally, I would try to keep a little bit more margin so it doesn’t feel like the text is crammed into the corner of the design. If you look at the general “margin” of the elements in the photo (see attached), it might be better to try to keep the text within that margin as well, so it helps with the sense of balance. I know sometimes you’re working with tight spaces, depending on all the elements in the photo and how much text you’re wanting to put on, but just wanted to throw that out there! 🙂June 1, 2021 at 10:18 pm #63026
So glad the revised additions are suitable to be used now! Yay! 🙂
@lenspirationlydia, thankyou for your comments/suggestions. 🙂 You’re right – keeping an even margin around the image would definitely have looked better. There was something about this design that bothered me, after I had enlarged the text, so perhaps that’s what it was! It was quite the challenge to enlarge the text and still maintain a pleasing design without it looking crowded or just too ‘big’. I’ll keep your suggestions in mind for future design projects!June 10, 2021 at 6:01 pm #63138Sarah BeersParticipantJune 11, 2021 at 11:10 am #63143
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