I moved the text up a little, but I wasn’t sure how much would look right. Right now it almost looks like her elbow is resting on the words, but if I moved it up even further would it look like a mistake? (As if I was trying to center it but didn’t quite get it centered)
I’m learning a lot through this-thanks!
Better. Try to move your text around till the entire design feels evenly visual weighted. By looking at the photo, I can tell it has a strong central weight to it, so I would move the text up even more.