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Hey @abbie, looks like your upload was over 2MBs in size.
@JamesStaddon – lol. Thanks for telling me, I should have checked that after (or before 😉 ) I submitted it! 😀 Let’s retry…..
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@abbie, nice picture! I would say that the sunlight on her head, and on the grass is a little harsh. Obviously you can’t control the sun, but that is something to take into consideration. Also, I might be wrong, but the picture looks cropped. I think it would have been better to use the rule of thirds. Another thing is in some places, it looks blurry and not sharp. The last thing, is you have a cute sis:)
I have to agree with that, it must be so much fun to have a little sister. 🙂
I’m liking the effect of the blown and blurred highlights in the foreground and background. Perhaps not in the hair? I think making more of a gradient from textured hair to bright hair would look better.
And perhaps not letting the blurred effect touch her hair?
It really is a cute pose. Did you ask her to pose there?
@oksch, I know – the sunlight is pretty harsh. I suppose I could have had her pose under a different tree…. The rule of thirds is something to have considered. And yes, she is cute! 😀 @JamesStaddon it is. 😀 Yes, I asked April to pose there. I tried resetting the focus-do any of these look better?
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