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August 14, 2018 at 5:12 pm #32949Lydia-BParticipantAugust 14, 2018 at 5:28 pm #32951Ryan MadarisParticipant
Cool! The only thing I really see is that the photo is overexposed. I’d use a shutter speed of 1/200 or 1/250 next time. I don’t think you’ll be able to rescue those highlights in post-production unless you shot the photo in RAW. Nice composition! I like the open space in this photo.
August 14, 2018 at 6:11 pm #32954Jinny SchoberParticipantGreat job!! I really like it! It could possibly be slightly overexposed, but in this case, I think it is fine!
Something I saw that was a little distracting from the plane, was that on the top left corner, it seemed to be slightly darker than the rest of the photo. Also, it wouldn’t hurt for the airplane to fill more of the photo, but if that would decrease the quality of the photo, by all means, leave it the way it is! 🙂 Great job! Airplanes are a fun challenge to take pics of!August 14, 2018 at 8:34 pm #32957Lydia-BParticipantYes, I realize it is over-exposed – I was taking other pictures and literally just pointed my camera, quick adjusted shutterspeed and snapped the photo. But I thought it might be fine in this case – it looks interesting to me to just have the airplane in the whiteness…
Jinny, thanks for mentioning that gray in the corner. Here’s a cropped photo with a slight white vignette to completely white out the edges so it matches the rest of the photo. Or… does it look better with the vignette going the other way, as in the second photo here?
August 14, 2018 at 8:47 pm #32960Jinny SchoberParticipantActually, I’m more of a fan of the second one, the one w/ the dark vignette. I like the cropped one better, but it might look even better if you moved the plane a little further down on the pic, w/o making it look to crowded (If that is possible, and I’m sorry if I am being too nitpicky 🙂 ).
August 14, 2018 at 8:49 pm #32961Jinny SchoberParticipantAnd that would be just a tad further down on the pic. 🙂
August 14, 2018 at 9:32 pm #32963Lydia-BParticipantAugust 14, 2018 at 11:47 pm #32966Jinny SchoberParticipantVery, Very nice!! I like taking plane pics! And having them turn out is AMAZING! 🙂 Great job!
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