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November 20, 2018 at 8:02 pm #35081Ben GlickParticipant
This is a photo that I took just recently, I am preparing to use it in a professional shot, any last advice before it goes off?
Name: IMG_2878.JPG
Dimensions: 3456 x 2304
Camera Make: Canon
Camera Model: Canon EOS REBEL SL1
Lens Model: EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS STM
Lens Specification: 18/1 55/1 0/1 0/1
F-Stop: F4
Aperture: F4
Focal Length: 18.0 mm
Shutter Speed: 1/41 s
Exposure Time: 1/40 s
Exposure Compensation: 0 EV
ISO Speed Rating: 1600
Date Time Original: 11/17/18 3:02:17 PM
Date Time Digitized: 11/17/18 3:02:17 PM
White Balance: Auto
Metering Mode: Multi-segment
Flash: No flash
Exposure Mode: Manual
Pixel X Dimension: 3456
Pixel Y Dimension: 2304November 20, 2018 at 9:02 pm #35094Josiah WaldnerParticipantI think the card in the middle should be more in focus, enough so that the wording can be read. Also, what is that grainy stuff near the edges of the table?
November 20, 2018 at 9:50 pm #35095Ben GlickParticipant@josiahw its an effect called opoid, it was kinda neat, cause the camera actually picked up detail in some aspects in stuff that was supposed to stay out of focus.
And for the card, do you really? I thought it may be just a little out of focus too! Its kinda cool tho, I like that you can read boyle tho. I’ll take it back and work on it just a smidge more…
November 21, 2018 at 10:54 am #35110Dan CopeParticipantI’ve never heard of “an effect called opoid.” Can you explain further?
November 21, 2018 at 6:06 pm #35168Ben GlickParticipantHey man! It would be my pleasure! So have you ever heard of an effect called Jitter? Its like taking a photo and making it pixilated, but it makes the pixels shiny instead of dull, its great for taking things out of focus while still drawing attention, below I have attached a photo with it, and without it.
November 23, 2018 at 1:40 pm #35206James StaddonKeymasterI’d love to critique these photos, @ryanben2! Let me know on the webinar on December 11: https://www.lenspiration.com/photo-critique-with-lenspiration-dec-11/
November 23, 2018 at 7:57 pm #35211Ben GlickParticipantHey @jamesstaddon anything or photo you wanna critque, please go ahead and do, I would love to see what you have to say and what you would change on these photo’s.
Thanks, Ben.
November 26, 2018 at 8:15 pm #35326Josiah WaldnerParticipantYea, I think the whole word should be in focus.
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