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    Ben Glick

    This is a photo that I took just recently, I am preparing to use it in a professional shot, any last advice before it goes off?

    Name: IMG_2878.JPG
    Dimensions: 3456 x 2304
    Camera Make: Canon
    Camera Model: Canon EOS REBEL SL1
    Lens Model: EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS STM
    Lens Specification: 18/1 55/1 0/1 0/1
    F-Stop: F4
    Aperture: F4
    Focal Length: 18.0 mm
    Shutter Speed: 1/41 s
    Exposure Time: 1/40 s
    Exposure Compensation: 0 EV
    ISO Speed Rating: 1600
    Date Time Original: 11/17/18 3:02:17 PM
    Date Time Digitized: 11/17/18 3:02:17 PM
    White Balance: Auto
    Metering Mode: Multi-segment
    Flash: No flash
    Exposure Mode: Manual
    Pixel X Dimension: 3456
    Pixel Y Dimension: 2304

    Josiah Waldner

    I think the card in the middle should be more in focus, enough so that the wording can be read. Also, what is that grainy stuff near the edges of the table?

    Ben Glick

    @josiahw its an effect called opoid, it was kinda neat, cause the camera actually picked up detail in some aspects in stuff that was supposed to stay out of focus.

    And for the card, do you really? I thought it may be just a little out of focus too! Its kinda cool tho, I like that you can read boyle tho. I’ll take it back and work on it just a smidge more…

    Dan Cope

    I’ve never heard of “an effect called opoid.” Can you explain further?

    Ben Glick

    Hey man! It would be my pleasure! So have you ever heard of an effect called Jitter? Its like taking a photo and making it pixilated, but it makes the pixels shiny instead of dull, its great for taking things out of focus while still drawing attention, below I have attached a photo with it, and without it.

    James Staddon

    I’d love to critique these photos, @ryanben2! Let me know on the webinar on December 11: https://www.lenspiration.com/photo-critique-with-lenspiration-dec-11/

    Ben Glick

    Hey @jamesstaddon anything or photo you wanna critque, please go ahead and do, I would love to see what you have to say and what you would change on these photo’s.

    Thanks, Ben.

    Josiah Waldner

    Yea, I think the whole word should be in focus.

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