[Paul Burgess]

I like the second composition better. Only suggestion would be to crop a bit of grass off the bottom, like on the original; I think it helped simplify things and keep the focus on the bee and flowers. Fantastic job on nailing the focus so well!

– Paul

[Paul Burgess]

Thanks for the tips James!

I am actually in the process of adding scripture to this. How did you guess?! 🙂

[Paul Burgess]

Hi Ezra,

Nice shot! The blurriness of the background is great, I like the centered composition here because the subject is almost symmetrical, and there’s detail in the dark fur. What I don’t like is the large, bright tree in the background; it’s rather distracting and unpleasant. If you could move around to eliminate that, I think it’d be better.

God bless,
Paul

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